tired today

revision of 'In the Beginning' continues... it's a crazily ambitious poem for me. Looking at it on sunday with my poetry group, I was amazed at how wel it works and yet still needs more. As if it's totally ok where it is, but yet could still be better...

that's a strange new poetry phenomena to me.

got a lot of errands today, which is always annoying. but ruminating on the changes sugested by my poetry sisters is going to carry me through the day, I'm sure.